Archive | November, 2011

Review (long overdue!): The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society by Mary Ann Shafer and Anne Barrows

3 Nov
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I’ve been reading a lot of YA and dystopian novels, but I thought I’d take a little time today to recommend a book that I meant to review over the summer, but somehow never got around to it.

 

I probably wouldn’t have picked this book up on my own because the title seemed really obscure, but a member of my critique group recommended it.  A few of us had met for lunch at a Starbucks in Barnes and Noble and being book people, we couldn’t leave without a couple of treasures.

 

The Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society by Mary Ann Shafer and Annie Barrows is a gem of a book that manages to be heartwarming, tragic, and informative all at the same time.

In post-World War II, a writer – Juliet Ashton – searches for her next story, when she receives correspondence from a gentleman asking her to come to the island of Guernsey to speak at the Guernsey Literary and Potato Peel Pie Society, a group which sprung up out of desperation during the war and provided the people of the island rare moments of happiness at a time of great struggle and tragedy.

There are a few things that make this novel special:

 

1)   It is written entirely in letters.

2)   It is written immediately following World War II – a time period that I know little about and hadn’t really thought much of.  It addresses the after effects of the war on England and particularly, the small island of Guernsey (yes, it does exist!), as well as memories of the occupation of Guernsey by Germans during the war.

3)   I learned much about the war that I hadn’t heard known before and considering the amount of books, movies, and documentaries on the subject, I was a little surprised by this.

4)   Even through letters, the characters come alive as quirky, strong, and immensely likable.

The novel is really about the characters – the Guernsey citizens – and their perseverance and resilience during tough times.  Even through tragedy, they come together in their literary society and find hope, support, and laughter.

5)   There is even romance.  It seems hard to believe that a story – and a romance – can be conveyed so profoundly and touchingly through letters, but Shafer and Barrows succeed.  There is such a sweetness to the story – even as there is some sorrow – that I could not help but be uplifted at the end.

 

Over the summer, I lent this book to my best friend and hopefully, she’s enjoyed it as much as I have.  If you are interested in history, romance, or simply a moving story, I recommend this book.

The Dreaded Synopsis

1 Nov

It boggles my mind that I can write an entire novel, but I cannot write a simple, one-page synopsis.

 

I’m in the process of applying for a writing mentorship program, which requires a one-page synopsis, 20 pages of my draft, and an artist’s statement.  Well, surely, after writing an 80,000-word story, I should be able to fill up one measly little page.  Besides, I review books all of the time.  I know how to sum them up.  Right?

 

Wrong.  So very, very wrong.

 

Apparently, I am an idiot when it comes to writing a synopsis for my own book.  I came to this conclusion over the weekend.  I wrote it.  I read it.  And it sucked.  Big time.  So, did I roll up my sleeves and try, try again?

 

No, I sulked.  If I can’t even write a one-page summary of my book, then my book must be a complex pile of crap.  (But I really, really hope that it’s not.)

 

However, while I may have given up for that day,  I haven’t given up.  My husband, who knows the entire story and is much more succinct than I am, has begun to help me pull out what’s important.  I just need to flesh it out from there.

 

Is it hard?  Very.

 

But can I do it?  God, I hope so!

 

I don’t have much advice for others trying to write a synopsis of their own, but I’ve read some of the tips and I’d love to pass them on.  If you have any tips or helpful pointers, let me know! (And if I’m wrong about something, let me know that, too. PLEASE!)

 

Necessary Elements the Synopsis Should Cover:

  1. What your book is about
  2. What characters we will care about (or dislike)
  3. What is at stake for your heroes
  4. What they stand to lose, and
  5. How it all turns out (Yes, you have to give away the ending.  I know, it hurts.)

 

Synopsis Checklist:

_____Does the opening paragraph have a hook to keep the reader reading?

_____Are your main characters’ conflicts clearly defined?

_____Are your characters sympathetic?

_____Can the reader relate to them and worry about them?

_____Have you avoided all grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes?

_____Have you hit on the major scenes, the major plot points of your book?

_____Did you resolve major conflicts?

_____Did you use present tense?

_____Did you use 3rd person?

_____Is it written in the same style as your book?

_____Is your main character’s name in all CAPS the first time mentioned in the synopsis? (ONLY the first time)

 

For more information and advice: http://www.fictionwriters.com/tips-synopsis.html